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CAPO CRIMINE
Posted: Oct 27 2008, 01:44 AM


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,,SUBPLOT SUBMISSION FORM
we thrive on it. no, we really do.


To submit your own subplot and get it up on the subplot page all shiny and official-looking, please read the guidelines here and submit the following form.

,,guidelines for submission

• First and foremost, we LOOOVE plotting. Because this game is all original, it's what drives the game and keeps things fresh. So submit, submit, submit! :3

• We do reserve the right to deny your submission. If we feel it's just too unlikely/farfetched for the game, we will deny it. If it involves characters behaving in a way that we don't think is in-character, we will deny it.

• That said, we will consider all submissions very carefully. If we think the plot has potential but isn't quite right yet, we'll work with you to change it up a bit (While keeping the integrity of your original idea) and make it happen! So, when you submit an idea, please be open to some changes.

• Remember to contact all players of the characters who are directly involved in the plot and get their "okay." You won't need permission from characters who are involved only indirectly, depending on their role.

• Fill out the following form and either post it as a reply here, or PM it to the administrator's account.

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Name of subplot:
____(Example: 'sins of the father,' is one we've used, etc.)
Characters/families/agencies directly involved:
____(I.e., ___ D'Ambrosio, Martel Family, LVPD, etc.)
Characters/families/agencies indirectly involved:
____(Same as above)
Quick outline of plot:
____(List of primary points. Just so we can get the gist of it, haha. Doesn't need to be long.)
Thorough description of plot:
____(This is what will go on the subplot page. Check for spelling, grammar, etc. Administration may edit as necessary.)
Any icons you want to use?:
____(List URLs, please)
Any additional thoughts?:
____(Whatever. :3)

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Landon Graves
Posted: May 31 2009, 05:00 PM


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Just a rough draft and an idea to throw at you guys, really. xD
Name of subplot:
Telltale hearts
Characters/families/agencies directly involved:
LVPD(?), Judas King(?), Landon Graves, other(?)
Characters/families/agencies indirectly involved:
Police and Criminals
Quick outline of plot:
After graduating the police academy with flying colors, Landon Graves was offered a job as an undercover drug runner by Bryson Darrow in order to arrest and bring down the drug lord, Judas King, and his runners.
Thorough description of plot:
Landon Graves graduated college a year early with a degree in Criminal Justice. He went straight to the police academy and graduated in the top ten percent, catching the eye of the LVPD. He was approached during his graduation and was offered a job to be an undercover drug runner, in order to finally put Judas King and his runners behind bars. It was the perfect plan. No one, not even some LVPD themselves, knew that Graves was even a cop. There was no way he could blow his cover. He accepted the job and was eventually picked up by one of King's runners. Slowly, he began to familiarize himself with the drug world and even made some personal friendships with the other runners. Two years have gone by, and Graves still has not turned a single runner in. The LVPD are beginning to be concerned that Graves might actually be working for the other side.
Any icons you want to use?:
Nope xD
Any additional thoughts?:
Please edit edit edit! It's just a rough draft. xD
CAPO CRIMINE
Posted: Jun 7 2009, 05:53 PM


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How's this sound?? I'll put it up if you approve, Cheshire. :)

Name of subplot:
Telltale Hearts
Characters/families/agencies directly involved:
Landon Graves
Bryson Darrow
Judas King
LVPD Narcotics Unit

Characters/families/agencies indirectly involved:
Warren Jericho
Alexandra Roth
Carver Gabrielson
Dovie Canatella
Other King-Regime Criminals

Quick outline of plot:
After graduating the police academy with flying colors, Landon Graves was offered a job as an undercover drug runner by Bryson Darrow in order to arrest and bring down the drug lord, Judas King, and his runners.
Thorough description of plot:
Landon Graves graduated college a year early with a degree in Criminal Justice. He went straight to the police academy and graduated in the top ten percent, catching the eye of the LVPD's seasoned detective, Bryson Darrow. He approached Graves during his graduation and offered him a job as an undercover drug runner, in order to finally put Judas King and his runners behind bars.

Graves accepted the job and Bryson was confident in it's success. It was the perfect plan. No one, not even most of the LVPD themselves, knew that Graves was even a cop. There was no way he could blow his cover.

He was initiated almost immediately into the position, given a few contacts, and was eventually picked up by one of King's runners, Carver Gabrielson, who several moths later recommended him to King and got him the position. Slowly, he began to familiarize himself with the drug world and began his investigation. What he didn't realize, however, is that he was simultaneously, accidentally, making some personal friendships with the other runners, as well.

Two years have gone by, and Graves still has not turned in a single runner. The LVPD are beginning to be concerned that Graves might actually be working for the other side, and want to apply pressure to remind him of who he is and who he's working for and get him to start doing his job, afraid that they will lose their star in the darkness of the drug world.


Any icons you want to use?:
I'll take care of it. :3
Any additional thoughts?:
I personally love love loooove this plot. There's so much that could be done with this, and it can incorporate a lot of characters and will effect a lot of characters should Graves ever start turning people in. *Rubs hands together.* :3
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Landon Graves
Posted: Jun 7 2009, 10:45 PM


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Yes yes yes yes I love it. :] YAY
CAPO CRIMINE
Posted: Jun 8 2009, 02:10 AM


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Hooray! Posted it up for ya, love. :] Totally excited about this one. x]
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Giovanni D'Aquino
Posted: Jun 11 2009, 06:37 PM


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Name of subplot:
Making Your Bones
Characters/families/agencies directly involved:

- Giovanni D'Aquino
- Miriam Salvatici
- Isaia Salvatici
- D'Ambrosio Crime Family

Characters/families/agencies indirectly involved:

- Mancini Crime Family
- Salvatici Family

Quick outline of plot:

Giovanni D'Aquino and a few fellow D'Ambrosio soldiers, are looking to make their bones, and at the same time send a message to the Mancini Crime Family. Giovanni decides to kidnap Miriam Salvatici, the sister of Mancini soldier Isaia Salvatici. Isaia is a constant thron in the D'Ambrosio's side, so they bust into Miriam's home in the dead of night while she is sleeping, and kidnap her.

Thorough description of plot:

The Mancinis are the constant and ever present enemy of the D'Ambrosio Family. Giovanni D'Aquino, a D'Ambrosio soldier from Castellammare del Golfo, Sicily, organizes a small team of four D'Ambrosio soldiers and plan to invade the home of Miriam Salvatici. Miriam is the sister of Isaia Salvatici. Isaia is a constant bother to the D'Ambrosio's so Giovanni plans to use Miriam to calm him down and subdue his actions. There is also another motive behind this, Giovanni wants to make his bones and prove himself to the D'Ambrosio hierarchy.

Any icons you want to use?:
Nope
Any additional thoughts?:
None
Audra Hendrix
Posted: Jul 4 2009, 11:58 PM





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Name of subplot:
If I’m Not Burning Bridges (I’m Out Buying Matches)
Characters/families/agencies directly involved:
Alexandra Roth
------ ------ (reporter)

Characters/families/agencies indirectly involved:
Bryson Darrow
LVPD

Quick outline of plot:
So basically, Alex and Mr. reporter have been quietly involved for several months, and all is going just dandy. However, an investigation is launched after a press leak and it eventually comes out that Alex and reporter are an item. At this point, the shit meets the fun and things go to hell in a frilly little handbasket.
Thorough description of plot:
Following a late night tumble through the hay after a Policeman’s Ball, Alex Roth and ----- ----- found themselves at a fork in the proverbial walk-of-shame road. They wavered only momentarily at the crossroads, opting for their own brand of relationship instead of awkward meetings on street corners every six months or so. So they continued their relationship quietly, as Alex had assumed that a relationship with a reporting “rat bastard” wouldn’t go over so well with the squad. However, four months later, all of her calculated topic avoidance and well-intentioned caution came around to bite her in the ass with a vengeance. A hushed-up IAB investigation had been launched in the hope of discerning the source of a press leak, and Alex’s relationship with ------ came to light and also came up for consideration in the investigation. Aside from the obvious, they found it curious that it had been kept a secret, and this seems to be the reason for the hopeless entanglement of shit and fan all along. ----- would have much preferred to tell whomever might want to listen about their relationship, but went along with the secret for Alex’s sake, and over time this seemed to create a bone of contention as their relationship progressed. While that elephant in the room trampled about in her private life, Alex found herself engaged in a shouting match with her partner after IAB had swept through with their witches’ brooms and surly attitudes and spread the information of her relationship. Now, as rumors fly and tempers rise in the squad, she finds herself with a lot of glares to give and a coarse lover to soothe. IAB seems unwilling to cut her loose and she’s growing increasingly infuriated at having to constantly defend a reputation that she’s done nothing to impugn, and it’s wearing on her to hold together such an already tempestuous relationship through such an inclement time. She not sure how much longer she can tiptoe around what has become a hole in her mind, a pains he’s constantly digging new graves for, but when it rains, it pours.
Any icons you want to use?:
I’d use this or this for Alex. Serious and such. Nothing other than those unless you have a spiffy idea for a reporter PB.
Any additional thoughts?:
Not really. Just feel free to tweak and add if you feel so inclined. Though now that I think about it, it could probably use some reporter POV, but my mind doesn’t want to give any right now.

We Are Reviewing, Thank You !!!

This post has been edited by Crocifisso Sparacio on Jul 6 2009, 11:37 AM


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