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My name is Waffle. All over the internet, thats my name lol. But look, I have a question to ask. But before I do, I want to commend you (The creator). I love the look of this site. Much Hollywood appeal and has potential to be a great and popular site. Now to the question.
I love to write and rp, but I'm more of a vet in the WRESTLING world of E_FEDS. I've been observing the way you guys write and its completely different.
In E-Feds we write in a play, TV or movie script format. IT seems as if you guys write in a book format. Now, it ok, If I wrote my rp's like this:
It was a beautiful day in the land called LA. A place with a spark, that attracts many social beings, for many different reasons. One guy in particular was a young man named Waffle who is a aspiring musician. He has come to LA in search of fame and fortune. More so happiness. On that day, Waffle was sitting on a bench in nice park. While observing the landscape, a young women walked up to him.
Waffle: How may I help you miss?
Lisa: Oh nothing. I just saw you over here, and being the person that I am, I had to meet and greet.
Waffle: Oh well, I'm Waffle.
Lisa: Nice to meet you Waffle and I'm Lisa.
VERSES
It was a beautiful day in the land called LA. A place with a spark, that attracts many social beings, for many different reasons. One guy in particular was a young man named Waffle who is a aspiring musician. He has come to LA in search of fame and fortune. More so happiness. On that day, Waffle was sitting on a bench in nice park. While observing the landscape, a young women walked up to him.
"How may I help you miss?" Waffle asked politely.
"Oh nothing. I just saw you over here, and being the person that I am, I had to meet and greet." responded the woman.
"Oh well, I'm Waffle."
"Nice to meet you Waffle and I'm Lisa.
Do you see the difference? Does it matter? or am I suppose to follow a certain format?
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Hello and HELP
