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Critique: This is a great conceptual image-- I quite like the idea behind it. However, I don't think it's pushed quite enough to make it fit the theme of "outside the box"-- it still needs something to make it a bit more surreal, something a little more unexpected.
For purely aesthetic critique, I think the text could be more thoughtfully placed here-- perhaps under the city reflection, to help draw the eye down to the buildings. Also, I think the paddle could be removed, since it disrupts the flow of the image.