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 The Plot, Finally wrote it, and I likes!
Nasatho
Posted: Jun 22 2005, 08:51 PM


Guardian of the Dead


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Written from the perspective of Kindu, as a warning to the wolves of what is to come.

-- Kindu's Warning --

As the day grows dim, remember me
That's all I ever ask of you.
Karnas, worry not for he,
Though oft the Moon-wolf may tempt you

Nasatho, the hungry ghost,
Who prowls by night and hunts by day,
Will offer blood to snare the most,
Power for his favorite prey

Suka, though her pack is Light,
Fights her darker side to keep.
Though her Followers will fight
Their god in darkness's steeped

And the War will vengeance free,
Even though they thought they knew.
As the day grows dim, remember me
That's all I ever ask of you...

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So what do ya think? No, it's not that much of a plot, but the basic stuff you can figure out from it is: that Kindu knows what will happen but this is about as much as he can do to stop it; Karnas, Suka, and Nasatho are gathering followers with empty promises or threats; the gods are much darker than they seem and will stop at nothing to win; and that some great revenge will take place. Up to you guys to figure out the rest of it!


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Suka
Posted: Jun 22 2005, 09:05 PM


The Sun-Goddess


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So as Suka, my role in the coming plot in unclear to myself. Would yo please explain it a bit further. . .? What.gif I believe that I think it is saying that Suka is trying not to be tempted by the power of the Dark and that she is fighting herself, as if part of her wants to join the Dark becaues of the corrupt lust for power.
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Kindu
Posted: Jun 23 2005, 06:11 AM


Wolf


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I like that it's written in Kindu's perspective. That way I know more about him, since he's my role and all.
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Luro
Posted: Jun 23 2005, 03:48 PM


Wolf


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Good, glad you like it... actually there's no particular plot I had in mind, not like so-and-so's pack does this and so this pack does this, etc. But yes, hold on... Okay, here's the deal:

Kindu is the creator, father to Karnas and Suka, who are siblings. Karnas is the wolf of the moon, and since that grows and shrinks in the sky, his powers also grow and shrink with the moon, which is why Kindu's saying not to worry. But his pack might be powerful, once they get some members. Since Suka's brother and Nasatho are evil, and Kindu's neutral, she's trying to fight it and be the "good" goddess like the wolves expect, metaphor for the pack struggling. Nasatho is trying to get the pack together by offering power or threatening death, (Arinu already "died") but not really going to go through with the rewards. No, we're not going to play them but we could ask players' permission to... possess? them... like, they have weird thoughts that represent the gods (we'd ask, then edit the posts). I dunno, what do you guys think?


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Kindu
Posted: Jun 25 2005, 03:49 AM


Wolf


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That sounds great. Tongue.gif
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Karnas
Posted: Jun 29 2005, 05:50 PM


Wolf


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Joined: 30-April 05



I like how it sounds. I am willing to play my part within the plot.


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.::I am Karnas, the God of the Moon, Fear, Darkness and Pain. I dwell in the shadows and realms of your mind. Beware..::
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