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 The Arrival, Hiro, Tomasu, and Myself.
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Posted: Dec 7 2007, 11:31 AM


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Kamatari cursed under his breath as the log hit the stone unscathed. "I need a shadow clone..." He sighed. He sat down and looked up at the sky. It had been raining just an hour ago, but the clouds were beginning to disperse, and the sun was breaking through.
"Alright!" He exclaimed, standing upright. He grabbed the log, and punched it with all of his might, sending the log high into the air. "wait for it... wait for it..." He said, watching the log closely. "Now!" As soon as the log was at his highest point, he leaped into the air and kicked it higher. Landing on a high branch, he jumped above the log and grabbed it by an extended branch. He spun in around, and hurled it at the ground. The log hit the rock again, but it didn't break as he had expected. He cursed again as he hit the ground.
It had been eight days since his training with Mijime, and the thought of a new jutsu was still exiting him. So he had decided to make his own. A simple Taijutsu combo, but it wasn't working very well...


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Posted: Dec 8 2007, 10:12 PM


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"try making your body heavier, or distributing your chakra throughout the log.." Mijime said, sitting nearby and writing some more down about the ushina history. "That should give you a harder impact, especialy if you control it correctly..."


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Posted: Dec 8 2007, 11:27 PM


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Kamatari jumped a the sount Mijime's voice. He had forgotten that he was there because he was so fixated on the technique.
"Sure." He said, setting the log up for another attack. He repeated the same steps- Punch, jump, kick. But this time, he added an extra jump using the Momikun's Platform technique- which he had gotten the hang of since his training in the cold. After the third jump, he kicked the log higher still, then grabbed the extra branch, and did as Mijime had suggested. He concentrated extra chakra into him right arm mussels and the log. He put his left hand on his right shoulde, and threw the log down again, this time, the log went down faster and harder, but there was still no destruction.
As Kamatari remained on his platform high above the ground, he got extremely angry, and began to shout. With the break of concentration, the platform exploded, sending Kamatari flying higher into the air. He was almost too stunned to react His flight upward ended slowly, and he began to speed towards the ground.
He tried making more platforms, but they all cracked because of the downward speed he was gaining. He decided to lessen the blow of hitting the ground as much as possible. He flipped so that his feet were pointing up at an angle, and jumped off of a platform he made at that position. His trajectory towards the ground changed to about a 45 degree angle, and Kamatari flipped to his back. Instead of hitting the ground with full force, he skipped along the ground, then flipped to his feet and winced. The pain wasn't as bad as it would've been if he had slammed directly into the ground, but from the slide along the ground, his back accumulated more than it's fair share of cuts and bruises.


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Posted: Dec 9 2007, 01:22 AM


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Mijime smirked at this. "That would be a handy technique if you could hide it underground..." He said, speaking about the platform technique. "Then you could simply blow your opponent back by jumping away from it..."

He went over to Kamatari, and stared down on him. "and you should try gaining more speed...make yourself heavier and then try it..."


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Posted: Dec 9 2007, 01:19 PM


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"How do I make myself heavier?" He asked, reaching over his shoulder and poking at a gash on the shoulder blade. He thought about the idea of the platform being a surprise attack. He tried it, and he could tell the platform was successfully formed underground, but when he tried to suddenly break concentration, the platform just faded away.


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Posted: Dec 9 2007, 07:28 PM


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"How else?" He asked, wondering if Kamatari knew what he did. "weights..they'll be pretty heavy at first, but it will allow you to speed quicker towards the ground, and help in the destruction of your opponent." He said sighing at him.


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Posted: Dec 9 2007, 07:45 PM


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"But I need to speed away from the ground." Kamatari groaned, "Besides, where am I going to find weights?" He put the log upright, then sat down and took out a scroll. He began to scribble down some notes about his combo.


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Posted: Dec 9 2007, 10:47 PM


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"ok...I don't really know how you'll do that..." He said walking away. "Anyway..we need to get going...the land of fire isn't that far away..." He sighed slightly. "We're going to your home town..right?"


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Posted: Dec 10 2007, 12:58 AM


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"Right!" He exclaimed, springing to his feet. He was kind of exited to be going home, but he was also truley horrified about what Hiro-sensei would think. The thought alone was enough to make his stomach drop.
"Maybe I should start calling him Hiro-sama..." He muttered under his breath. But he shook it off and grabbed his bag. He also rolled up the scroll and placed it in his Kimono for safe keeping.


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Posted: Dec 10 2007, 04:28 PM


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"I wouldn't start something like that, unless you plan on being around him for a long time...san or dono would be better off..." He yawned as he walked, each step taking him towards the place where he rarely wanted to go, each step closer to his own original home the one he had abandoned years ago...


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Posted: Dec 10 2007, 07:07 PM


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"It was a joke." Kamatari said, "You are a missing nin aren't you?" He was wondering wether he'd be scolded or not if he brought a criminal to the village. If Mijime wasn't a missing nin, he'd be fine, but...


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Posted: Dec 11 2007, 12:09 AM


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"yes.." he said lowly. "I am a missing nin, a criminal in 3 countries, and know as a 'demon' " He said this, as if he bore this burden as a weight to keep him from his destiny. Which, in turn, he believed it was.


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Posted: Dec 11 2007, 12:23 AM


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Kamatari's heart sunk and he took half a step away from Mijime. "Does the fire country fall under one of those three?" He asked, though he was almost sure it was.


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Posted: Dec 11 2007, 06:46 PM


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He laughed slightly. "Of course, this was where i was born...I basically grew up here for 16 years...By then...I had killed maybe...179 people..." He stared ahead as the border line came into view. Ninja were posted on either side of the gate, surely a man in the bingo book would be noticed, so..he went for someone else..

His hand rose to his face and his face..well..changed...He didn't need someone else's face to duplicate, he had many saved from earlier times. A 36 year old man did the trick, he covered his face with the fake one quickly, and altered his body slightly to make it look real.


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Posted: Dec 11 2007, 07:19 PM


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"You grew up here? AND killed people?!?" Kamatari exclaimed, "and won't they see through that?!" He was now panicing and making strange unusual suggestions to avoid crossing anyone's path.


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