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 Picture of you, Annie fic
chari0t
Posted: Sep 21 2008, 08:45 AM


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Picture of you

Rated: General
Reason: Because it doesn't includes and sexual content etc, at least not for now.
Type of Story: Think I'm going to make it a little long. Haven't decided yet.
Summary: Annie Wilson is pregnant. But to who? Is the father of her baby her crush from when she was 14, Ethan or the richest guy in school, Ty?

This may have some writing mistakes here and there. I will try to correct them. Just bare with me here^^

Chapter 1:

I sighed.
What am I going to do? How am I going to tell mum and dad that I’m am pregnant? They are going to kill me! I cuddled up under my blanket.
- Hey sis, what’s up?, Dixon said while he and Silver walked into me room holding hands.
I couldn’t speak. My voice wouldn’t come.
- What’s wrong?, he said, you’re crying. Silver came and sat right next to me.
I felt something warm rolling down my cheeks. I shrugged my shoulders. Dixon and Silver was the only ones I’m could tell. No one else could know. Dixon touched my cheek and wiped away my tear. I whispered to them;
- If I tell you something, do you promise not to tell mum and dad?
- Yeah, of course., they both said.
- Dixon, go shut the door., Silver said to him as she sat her self in a more comfy position. I could barely look her in the eyes. Silver touched my chin and pulled it up so I had to look at her.
- What is wrong? She asked.
I looked at Dixon. He looked so worried. I felt another tear running down my cheek.
- It can’t be that bad., Dixon said, It’s not like your pregnant or anything like that.
I fell into pieces when he said that. Crying my heart out. Silver tried to comfort my but nothing could make my feel better. Dixon looked shock when he realized what was going on.
He jumped of the bed and started walking around my room.
- It can’t be true, what are mum and dad going to say? They’re going to kill you, you know! He said.
- Dixon, you’re not helping much., Silver said to him. She was trying all she could to calm me down.
- I know, I know. I just, how could this be happening Annie? I thought you were smarter than this!, he said. He came and sat right in front of me.
- I don’t know. I just happened., I whispered.
Dixon reached out and pulled me close to him. He stroke me over me back, trying to comfort me. I began to sob.
- Shhh. It going to be okay., he said rocking me like a baby.



Short chapter I know. Have a head ache and Iæm going to bed. Tell me what you think of the first chapter! biggrin.gif
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Drew
Posted: Sep 21 2008, 05:26 PM


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Interesting concept. I like it smile.gif. Please update soon smile.gif
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