Primarks, can i have one?

[Farseer Concerta]

ok so in the GW fluff there are 2 missing primarks so i thought i would right a codex around what would happen if one of them was found basicly i want to know if i can do this or would it be frowned apon in my deffence crons get ctan

[Hardrainfalling]

most attempts at primarks i have seen make them stupidly powerful
I would say they should have +1 W and +1 str and +1 T compared to the normal top marine commander and thats it

[Farseer Concerta]

not assking for stats(although it is very good of you to offer)i need to no if u think it is stupid or not

[Hardrainfalling]

no its not but think carefully each primark represented part of the emperors persoanlity, Horus his ambition, for example others his fury, piety, discipline, courage, organisational ability so what characteristics are missing>? think about the other primarks and fill in the gaps

[Farseer Concerta]

i was thinking his brilence cause my primake has close ties to the cult mechanicus on mars

[Hardrainfalling]

nice could work well

[Farseer Concerta]

well this is what i've got keep in mind i don't like typeing so this isnot going to be aowsome

in the year m35.456 of the emporors grace a small capsule was found driffting out of a warp storm by an explorator vessel the capsule was taken on boared the capsule was found to be holeding a chiled the chiled grpwed at an amazing speed within 2 years the boy had reached his teens he was found to have a complet working geanseed with 1 difference there waere 20 orgions in his geneseed it has been speculatid that the 20th orgion is used to store infomation so that warrior can be traind faster. after 4 years the chiled was taken to the high lords of tera were they performed many tests on the boy and discocvered(much to there discuste)
that he was in fact 1 of the issing primarks

[farseer of beil-tarun]

it's primarch's, not primarks

[Farseer Concerta]

thank you i was wondering how it was spelt

[farseer of beil-tarun]

no problem. i'm always here to clear word, and background questios up. so just PM me if you got to ask.

[Farseer Concerta]

so i would like more in put

[chani the flame]

that sounds like a cool idea

[Farseer Concerta]

well saying "that sounds cool"dosen't help dose it

[Hardrainfalling]

exactly what areas would you like help in? the second of the horus hersey books describes the scattering of the primarchs from where they were genetically engineered under the himmalyas

[Farseer Concerta]

that sounds kinda kool

[TheEagle82]

Granted that i do so hate Space Marines, i do still have a very good working knowledge of their fluff.

Firstly, i think the idea in itself is a very good one. Its not one that i've seen yet, and with marines, thats a plus.

Secondly, for a good description of what the champer under the Himmilaya's looked like, read the second Horus Heresy book.

Third, If your actually planning to make said Primarch, remember that they were larger than regular marines. Of course, if GW made something in scale, marines should tower over the Guard. So i guess its all subjective.

Fourth, Ferros Mannus, the Primarch for the Iron Hands, also has a close tie to the Mechanicus. He is believed to be resting in a stasis chamber on Mars. So you might want to look a bit at the fluff for them.

Hope any of this helps... of course you could already be done with the whole thing by now... :blink:

[Spacefrisian]

Not sure if it should be done why so check this site out. It gives a lot of info on the subject.

Bolter and chainsword?

(Some sugest that Sigmar of Fantasy was a Primarch though)