Missing., Heh. GAY but wtf.
RazorbladeLove
Posted: Feb 19 2006, 04:22 PM


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I’m standing here waiting;
Missing you.
I’m saying your name
And wishing, that you
Could say mine

I’m sitting here waiting;
Missing you.
I’m saying your name
I hope you can see me;
Because you are with me

Now I’m lying here waiting;
Missing you, holding on
(I’m) Screaming your name
There’s stuff on the floor;
Now I’m lying here wishing,
And I’ve something to tell you.

I’m still lying here waiting;
Missing you, wishing.
I’ve something to tell you,
I wish that I told you
There’s more stuff on the floor;
Letting go, thinking
I love you.
Laika
Posted: Feb 19 2006, 07:37 PM


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Thats a really good start
but if you want you lyrics to be more good and less cliche and typical, just play around with flashy words and create some metaphors.
and the number one rule in lyrics - fuck making complete sense. try and be mysterious.
Malevolence
Posted: Feb 20 2006, 01:10 AM


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QUOTE (Laika @ Feb 19 2006, 07:37 PM)
and the number one rule in lyrics - fuck making complete sense. try and be mysterious.

Pretty good advice as long as you don't jump around to 5,000 different things.
Stevey
Posted: Feb 20 2006, 02:22 AM


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Do it system style, make it sound senseless untill you think about it
RazorbladeLove
Posted: Feb 21 2006, 01:03 AM


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Ooo.

Thats a good one.
Alf Muniz
Posted: Feb 27 2006, 06:33 PM


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The easiest way to write lyrics, I find, is to get other people to do it for me.
Simple really.
soad646
Posted: Apr 13 2006, 08:53 AM


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lol, i like to write a small chord sequnce with either bar or power chords and just sing about random shit to it and write it down, thats probably the best way
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