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 character profile KOUJI, What Kouji is
Ginsenshi
Posted: Nov 17 2005, 07:35 PM


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Character profile

Name: Kouji Ginsenshi
Age: 16
Grade: 10th
School: Northwood High, Georga, USA.
appearance: That of a punk with long black hair to his shoulders, black t-shirt and black jeans with a - black leather belt around his wrist. Kouji is always seen wearing a black leather jacket every where he goes.

Biography:
The oldest of three children, Kouji had gotten into may fights mustly streetfights back Tokyo, Japan. Later in life he moved to the States. His mother and father were killed in a car crash when he was 9. Only Kouji and his younger sister, Yuki age7 at the time and brother Kouichi 10 at the time lived after the crash. Though Kouji is one to keep to himself and not talk much to others since then, but once you get to know him hes an okay guy. Yuki, Kouichi and Kouji lives try and understand, as to why they dead. So Kouji trains the in martial arts and the way of the sword to keep his mind off his trouble past. Kouji also writes Haiku and English potrym lyrics etc.

I'm a bit of a lone wolf, I don't need anyone's help or friends.- Kouji

But when his friends are in a pinch, my bro will rush to help them out, without even thinking of the danger he's putting himself in!- Yuki

Other:

Number: 114

This post has been edited by Ginsenshi on Nov 27 2005, 12:27 AM
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Kaishi
Posted: Nov 26 2005, 04:54 AM


KUZE & PANDA 4EVER


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Let's get the stupid part out of the way first...
Your signature's a little big. Could you make it a tad smaller?

Could you make the first part of your appearance into less of a list, and into more of a description? Kind of like "Samwald has rough hair with purple highlights. He usually wears dark clothes." Something like that for the first part. The rest is fine concerning the appearance.

The biography sounds more like a summary for a samurai movie than the history of a sixteen year old kid. Could you, at the very least, go into detail about the murder, how and why Kouji Ginsenshi knows so many different martial arts, and, would you mind moving Kouji to the USA? ^_^

Thanks in advance.
~ Kaishi.
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Kaishi
Posted: Nov 26 2005, 10:25 PM


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Sorry, I was unclear. My bad.

I meant for you to just rewrite the appearance into more of a description, instead of like a list. But, thanks to my directions, it seems like you made the whole thing into a big description...

Rewrite it again following the template like you did before. This time, don't forget the "Other" and "Number" field, otherwise we won't be able to move you to the Roster forum. ^_^

It still sounds a little too fantasy-ish, what with him being "the Guardian of the main lands" and being a samurai...
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Kaishi
Posted: Nov 27 2005, 12:28 AM


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Approved!
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