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Err...Found something quite...questionable:
| QUOTE | Alice: Age Controller
Tara can control her age by use this Alice. She can become a baby, a high school student and adult. But, it only in appearance .So, her Alice is classified to sematic type. She wears ring (limiter item). Her Alice’s shape is Intermittent.
Her Alice can control other people and animal too. She only can use it four times everyday. |
How does she activates her alice? Does she needs direct eye contact? Must she be at least 2-3 meters away from the person she targets?
| QUOTE | Personality:
She looks innocent. Because, she's nice. But, no one can disturb her. She can protect her self by becoming an adult. She's not afraid to anyone.If she's angry she will make a plan for her revenge. It always makes people to not try to mess with her. |
Like what Narumi-sensei said, there are a lot of things when you say 'disturb'. And maybe she's not innocent at all...Maybe 'innocent-looking' if that's what you mean.  | QUOTE | | She is nervous, never put things in its place. Sometimes, she forgets to bring her books to school |
Err...why is she nervous?
| QUOTE | | 6 years After Tara (Her real name is Naomi) Born. She put Tara under a pine tree in Tokyo. He went there by train. |
"He"? I think that would be "She".
| QUOTE | | She became an elementary student when spring was come. At first, her friend likes her. But, one day someone disturb her by burn all her family's photos that she had because he hates Tara . She wanted to punish him by turn him to a baby. She didn't want to turn him to his real age until her teacher forced her to turn him back. That's all. |
"was" should be "had" who is that someone? And how did Tara found out? Well, other mods, feel free to add additional comments to her bio. That's all I found questionable. I hope your bio will be approved. Good luck. |
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