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Unkown path, dedicated to my grandfather| MrsFederer |
Posted: Aug 15 2008, 02:00 PM
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Novellist  Group: Members Posts: 59 Member No.: 8 Joined: 29-September 06  |
It was only until this Wednesday, when there were 2 weeks of his passing, that I managed to write something..
Unknown path Your shadow slowly left in the sight What can I do, but stare in the night? You left me your dreams, locked in my heart But I was crying with blood, torn appart Came in my dreams, yet now it’s too late When opening eyes, I see the black fate How can i know, are you still there? The sky is empty, the moon is gone And then I stopped, in the middle of my trip From the moon and above, to take another sip I know it was you, around that made me turn High in the sky, a star can now burn May you rest in peace...  |
   
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| suomigoth |
Posted: Sep 10 2008, 09:35 PM
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Dr. Goth Group: Admin Posts: 187 Member No.: 1 Joined: 7-September 06 |
Such a touching poem! I think it's very worthy of your grandfather's image, may he indeed rest in peace.
One small note: spelling error in the 4th line, appart instead of apart ^^ |
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| MrsFederer |
Posted: Sep 19 2008, 06:00 PM
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Novellist Group: Members Posts: 59 Member No.: 8 Joined: 29-September 06 |
Ah...thanks...too bad I already printed the poem...  Ah, well...thanks anyway!  |
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