Loving You From Afar
Zinzey16
Posted: Mar 1 2006, 11:47 PM


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This is a poem I wrote awhile ago. C & C are welcomed.....

Loving You From Afar

If only for an instant
I could see your beatiful face
It would fill my empty spirit
With so much life and grace
As I watch and you unknowing
I love you from afar
I can see your face is glowing
Underneath the brightest star
In a great majestic palace
Of "forever" do I wait
And not once feeling callous
To the outcome of my fate
Forever will I want you
And forever you will be
A memory of something true
That wasn't meant for me
I'll see you standing there
And want you standing here
But always loving from afar
And never very near
Chased115
Posted: Mar 2 2006, 12:14 AM


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Very well written Zinzey. Well done!
Zinzey16
Posted: Mar 2 2006, 01:17 AM


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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'll post some more when I've got a bit more time.
Chester
Posted: Mar 5 2006, 02:13 PM


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Not bad.
Zinzey16
Posted: Mar 5 2006, 09:19 PM


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Thanks Chester.





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